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The Depths, an adult furry webcomic – Page 54: Rivalry
Whew! Kalea’s okay. <3 You can all breathe now…
So now we know…
Now you can understand perhaps Malana isn’t trying to outdo Leilani for the sake of pleasing Jamie. Being the overlooked sister, maybe she just wants to prove to herself that she’s just as capable as Leilani. It’s the classic sibling rivalry story. *^^*
KJ and I worked out this little bombshell, but only after I looked over the comic one day and offered, “Say KJ…you know, we should make those two girls sisters.”
It was like a bomb went off in our heads. *^^*
Also, it was Kino’s idea for the little spit-take there. Things were too intense! And we needed some moment of light before the big reveal. We hope everyone enjoyed the surprise, and now realize Malana and Leilani, as sisters, adds a whole new dimension to them.
One more note: Those who are curious, the brackets around the dialogue is the standard comic code for when characters are speaking another language. In this case, the girls have switched to their normal Tahitian dialect. I’m sure it’s very beautiful but I do not speak it myself. *^^*
Written by Leilani
Art by Kino Jaggernov
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Phew. Kalea’s DEFINITELY safe now.
I figured Leilani’s mom was taken by the ocean, so that’s not a particularly big surprise to me.
But SISTERS!? And here I figured they’d just be rivals.
Excellent work as always!
Thank you, Ruku. It was a great last-minute idea we tossed in. *^^* That’s what I love about this comic so far, nothing’s been set in stone and all my hard work of notes and notes suddenly don’t matter anymore. lol
So it’s finally revealed that Leilani and Malana are sisters. One would never guess that they’re related.
And yet, it could probably have been hinted at early on, maybe towards the beginning, when Kalea refers to Leilani as the daughter of their chieftain, and Malana seems to get pretty angry quickly. *^^* Refer to page 12
UNBELIEVABLE!
Now THAT WAS A DAMN TWIST!
I’m glad readers seem to approve of this rather revealing aspect. *^^* Thanks, hon.
Oh… Kalea is alive… So Goooooood!!! \(0w0)/~
And when she “slept”, she was also so cute… yes, Cute Face! I love Kalea!
Kalea is definitely a waifu now. *^^*
Whew, bad feeling passed…I was anxious about Kalea’s fate and after seeing her alive I practically melted like butter on my chair…And that twist😱…90 minutes of applauses, damn good job!!!
thank you, Angel! *^^*
?? i missed the memo.!!? an here i thought all 3 were sisters…
hence my printer toner joke… 🙁
an yay ,, all rudder butts are good/ok…
Somehow Lani, I had a feeling that Leilani and Malana had to be sisters. Only sibling rivalry can get that heated. ^^😇
I love Kalea’s sleepy drowned face, and how she expel water afterward
Poor Kalea. Probably the most undersea action she’s had in a while. *^^*
just a FYI.. your vote incentive is showing as a broken link…
Nuuuu!
I fixed it, really, I was able to get it to come up. *^^*
I suggest reloading the page maybe?
nope,, still comes up as “broken link”,, for me.. don’t know bout everyone else.. an wen i reload it comes back as “403 forbidden”..
an if no one else says anything,, don’t worry i have seen it , (an know how to get round it..) i just wanted you to know.. 🙂
..an wow that hair…
ok .. now it worked fine…
Oh, good! Yay!